hello I am Jed and I am here to comment on your litarcy circle. one thing I want to say is Abe prounacd medallion wrong. also Jayden said his summary quite quickley. other than that it was a very good video.
I like the way you put in your own voice. Did you think about making the words bigger. Why don’t you make the font different so it is easier to read. Why do you have lots of words in the artful artist.
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ReplyDeletehello I am Jed and I am here to comment on your litarcy circle.
ReplyDeleteone thing I want to say is Abe prounacd medallion wrong.
also Jayden said his summary quite quickley.
other than that it was a very good video.
I like the way you put backgrounds in
ReplyDeleteYou taught me putting a little bit more words in
Why did you put your own voice
Why do you put in your names ?
I like the way you put in your own voice.
ReplyDeleteDid you think about making the words bigger.
Why don’t you make the font different so it is easier to read.
Why do you have lots of words in the artful artist.